Sunday Morning

 



There`s something ,

about a Sunday morning,

that makes you feel all alone .


when i woke

this morning,

the sky was gray


a wisp of cold winds

blowing all day

a hint of winter in the air


the rain

will come soon

as the sun goes down revealing the moon


a feel of 

lonilness in the air

as i sit on the porch swing


wishing

that i wasn`t

all alone...


 

 

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Starward's picture

Have you read Wallace

Have you read Wallace Stevens' great poem, Sunday Morning?  It is an interesting variation on the meaning of Sunday Mornings.


Starward

 

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i have not,but i will,,thanks

i have not,but i will,,thanks

patriciajj's picture

An elegant and atmospheric

An elegant and atmospheric snapshot, with just the right details to draw us right in. Well done. 

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thanks for the visit pat

thanks for the visit pat

bishu's picture

Good read my friend

Good read 


©bishu 

 

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thank you my friend,,merry

thank you my friend,,merry christmas

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You just have a way of

You just have a way of putting me there in that thought, that experience! Love what you do! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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we`ve all been there i`m

we`ve all been there i`m sure,,thanks

Dove's picture

Awe! well I hope you never

Awe! well I hope you never find yourself alone!

 

I always love grey skies 

the look of stormy clouds 

The images that fly on by

 

Have yourself a Bright Holiday 

filled with warmth and love

Hope your every Sunday is filled 

with peacefullness 

word_man's picture

never lonely when your around

never lonely when your around dove,,we actually got about 1 inch of snow ,rain and sleet

thanks

roseblossoms's picture

December’s moon is

December’s moon is also

called the ”Cold Moon”

The coldest time of year

Sunday morning is usually 

family time! Perhaps it’s 

why one may feel lonely!

 

”a hint of winter in the air”

 

A very cool line , burrr!

 

 

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well i thank you for the

well i thank you for the visit

Cascade's picture

You're never alone.. But it

You're never alone..

But it was a good poem.  Best wishes and happy holidays to you.

word_man's picture

merry christmas to you,and

merry christmas to you,and thanks