Sunday Morning

 



There`s something ,

about a Sunday morning,

that makes you feel all alone .


when i woke

this morning,

the sky was gray


a wisp of cold winds

blowing all day

a hint of winter in the air


the rain

will come soon

as the sun goes down revealing the moon


a feel of 

lonilness in the air

as i sit on the porch swing


wishing

that i wasn`t

all alone...


 

 

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Starward's picture

Have you read Wallace

Have you read Wallace Stevens' great poem, Sunday Morning?  It is an interesting variation on the meaning of Sunday Mornings.


Starward

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word_man's picture

i have not,but i will,,thanks

i have not,but i will,,thanks


ron parrish

patriciajj's picture

An elegant and atmospheric

An elegant and atmospheric snapshot, with just the right details to draw us right in. Well done. 

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thanks for the visit pat

thanks for the visit pat


ron parrish

bishu's picture

Good read my friend

Good read 


©bishu 

 

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thank you my friend,,merry

thank you my friend,,merry christmas


ron parrish

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You just have a way of

You just have a way of putting me there in that thought, that experience! Love what you do! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

word_man's picture

we`ve all been there i`m

we`ve all been there i`m sure,,thanks


ron parrish

Cascade's picture

You're never alone.. But it

You're never alone..

But it was a good poem.  Best wishes and happy holidays to you.

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merry christmas to you,and

merry christmas to you,and thanks


ron parrish

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  your words summon the

 

your words summon the feeling