Always

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Always

 

Anytime you are in trouble,

 

losing a life once so happy,

 

whose time passes by with pain

 

and the world hurts deep inside

 

you will see me standing here

 

side by side with you forever

 


Author's Notes/Comments: 

A short love poem

ttom's picture

time passes by with pain made

time passes by with pain made me think of james taylor you got a friend.

Seryddwr's picture

Enormous assurance compressed

Enormous assurance compressed into such a small space---that is classic!  I wish I had been able to talk to the ladies like that when I was your age.

 

One suggestion:  change who's to whose to achieve grammtic propriety in the third line.


Seryddwr

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