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Charming illusion

what a charming illusion of peace for confusion.
Time after time I saw you smile again and again.
Black desolate heart I would never begin to think that you would be the one to pretend.
But here we've reached the end, and it doesn't matter to what state your in.
Even so I had saw the condition before, though my hope was waiting at your last.
They say you had a bright future, but it had already come to pass.
Now where is your prize, the one they've promised you?
What a charming illusion.

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sorry, this poem is new.. I will be editing it but here it is so far. thank you for reading:) Please do leave a comment.

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last updated 4 January 2013 - 8:19am
©4 January 2013 - 8:14am — WoeIsMe
4 January 2013 - 10:26pm — MoonCruxCollision
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really enjoyed this one,

really enjoyed this one, looking forward to see more from you :)

24 March 2013 - 3:54pm — WoeIsMe
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thank you, well then in that

thank you, well then in that case make sure you read the recent ones I have posted. :)

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4 January 2013 - 3:06pm — Adeyokun
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good work

good work.

24 March 2013 - 3:54pm — WoeIsMe
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thanks Adeyoken, I am glad

thanks Adeyoken, I am glad you like it. peace be to you.

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4 January 2013 - 12:05pm — Bloodbutterfly
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Amazing

Your word choice and everything flows, I loved it and can't wait to read more of your poems. Keep up the good work!

You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.

4 January 2013 - 12:25pm — WoeIsMe
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blood butterfly

Thank you :) you are my first commenter! :D I'll make sure to check your poems out soon thank you I am glad you like it I hope to have more poems soon.

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