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Erase the Darkness
High noon, come take away the night
Come steal it right from beneath my nose
For, my eyes weren't built for darkness
Weren't made for seeing starsless nights
Or staying closed
Goodbye, babe
So sorry we couldn't change
But, don't worry
Someday, someday
The sun will erase the darkness again
Now memory must suffice
Though I'm not sure pain will disperse dispite the advice I've been given
For, only God knows when love will return
And, when I'll be able to discern
Hell from Heaven
So, goodbye, babe
For a while at least
So sorry we couldn't change
In spite of our dreams
But, don't worry
Someday, someday
The sun will erase the darkness within the both of us
Nice flow, nice imagery..
Nice flow, nice imagery..
I which you could erase my
I which you could erase my darkness, i have read quite few of your poetry but i was always ressistant to ask you to be you frind, no because i see a bad person in your words, to the opposite, i see , one thing which had made me uneasy, the all christanity, don`t take me wrong, i beleive in a higher power but mine has no name, maybe i wish i had your faith,l but faith to me is a simple hollow word.
and despise this i actually very enjoy this, it is full of hope, forgiveness, compassion and love, and despsie the pain you must have suffer who had honnestly spoke your heart.
your poem made me humble, and it is not often i feel this.
mayybe u could help me to find a name of my god?
eitherway, this poem touch me deeply.
blesings and lights, Herve/ Margot.
Visual poet/ Libertine lost in a labyrinth of complexities, methaphors, searching for the essence/ Ink of life/ death to spell my syphilistic words on the page/ screen.
This is a great poem.
This is a great poem. Powerful imagery.