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In this silly little pool

Silly little tides,
in a funny little pool,
I'm at my end,
Drowning to get to you.

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©23 August 2013 - 8:14pm — WhatIAmOrWillBe
23 August 2013 - 8:20pm — Morningglory
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Here's a line... grab on and

Here's a line... grab on and hold tight. I'll try to pull you in. ;)

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23 August 2013 - 8:28pm — WhatIAmOrWillBe
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Nice!

Makes for a much more playful ending for sure...  I like it.  

Thanks for the suggestion.  

jrfehlmann