"We The Unnoticed Equilibrium, The Introspective"

These days emotions of any style

Shape the times like statements,

Hello, and, Goodbye... Maybe.

Temporary worth of small measure

Hearts find investing less and less lovely.

Most roll, go along, conform effortless

Those that feel more, special, sensitive

Find our pace at ill in general

This is no world for the introspective

We fall short, and lack in celebration

but if not for the weak, timid, sensitive

Could a world really be constant

Unbalanced and unorganized masses

all immune to the empathy despised

until that favor returns to them

leaving they the hurt, the scorned

and violent, as they demand

is to our whispered ability to see,

to hear and feel and imagine

New ways of dealing, creating

Contributing to a world that isn't shared

we do, for we are meant, built,

Stuarts unsung, and devalued

important.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

first draft, thoughts about this worlds focus upon the extroverts and devaluing of we the introverts.  Still needs  A LOT of something, and editing but not a bad start.

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Does this even make sense?

There's a point, but is it unfocused or to easy to cypher?  More later I guess.  Any suggestions, or contributions are welcome and greatly appreciated.  

 

Thanks All.

 


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