Broken Mold, Post Perfection

You in this world
Every time, any time
Eyes Make time For you.
How you were made
The way you are.
Intentionallly flawed...

Broken mold, post perfection.

As lovely as you
Your imperfections
Here they are beatiful
They fit,
They compliment,

Broken mold, post perfection

Even from a distance
I fall in
Each time,
Every time,

The way
you can be
Broken, perfect to me

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WhatIAmOrWillBe's picture

re reading this and wow

if only I could write like that all the time


jrfehlmann

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Beavis took the words right

Beavis took the words right out of my mouth! yes this is almost immaculate as far as my taste for poetry and subject matter! you are very very talented And this is another reason why I want, no EXPECT YOU TO WRITE MORE!!! eagerly anticipating your next masterpeice Cheers Kindly SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

WhatIAmOrWillBe's picture

You really do flatter a guy !.. I dont feel talented

Your words are encouraging indeed. And i thank you very sincerely for posting such deeply thought out comments. Honestly most my writing isnt... Its me, my smart phone, voice to texting in the car on my way to work. Just random thinking that i often feel lacks sincere meaning. Brought on by a memory of a moment passed, or something. It wasnt until your comments and willingness to post that i began to play with the idea that others may enjoy them , i might be able to use words as an artistic medium. So i guess what im saying isif its posted, and hundreds arent... Its for you since you seem sincere so ag@in thank you. I am happy you enjoy them.


jrfehlmann

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I agree with Ssmoothie! You

I agree with Ssmoothie! You are very talented! I skimmed through your portfolio last night and loved what I saw. I'm often on the go when I read and comment, and can't take the time they really deserve, but I have you bookmarked for return visits. Please post more!

SSmoothie's picture

i do the same!

I write plays these poems are soul food :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

SSmoothie's picture

i do the same!

I write plays these poems are soul food :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

SSmoothie's picture

i do the same!

I write plays these are soul food :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Amazing poem!

Stunningly beautiful!

WhatIAmOrWillBe's picture

I thank you sincerly. For reading and posting.

Thank you beavis.


jrfehlmann