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IN TIME
Ever slowly,
unquestionable steps
drawing closer
eyes to savor mine...
Ever closely,
questionable questions
dismissed...
Drawn upon certainty,
kiss.
Ever slowly,
questionable time,
draws the line
dots its' "i"'s...
Ever closer,
unquestionable day exists.
Ever gently,
savoring...
Until, such time permits.
There is something awesome and mysterious about time. Yet it is something that defines our humanity because with the passage of time, the beings that we are change in different forms. For me, Valerie's "IN TIME" is a yearning for the unquestionable. This is a poem that tries to explicate our human feelings through the passing eyes of time. Hear Valerie: "Ever closely, questionable questions dismissed... Drawn upon certainty, Kiss."... Ever closer, unquestionable day exists. Ever gently, savouring... Until, such a time permits." Where else, indeed, but in Valerie's unique style can on find such exploring lines? "IN TIME", surely, for me, defines our humanity - our human yearnings and longings through the fleeting eyes of time. Thank you, Valerie, Flower, for letting us have this exploring, prying piece of poetry. Ugonna Wachuku
Dear Valerie, I enjoyed this poem very much. Well written! Beautiful! Bye! Teresa
This piece is also very beautiful. The inspiration for such a poem must be wonderful! I am so glad that Renee' helped me find you, Valerie! I have loved spending some time on your pages reading. You have soul.
Another good one! I like the way you phrase your words!