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SUNSET
Over my life in theatrical dreams,
Periods in time, moments sublime,
Passing events and blessings of gifts;
over a lifetime of thoughts to lift.
Memories forgotten?
Or, just put to rest?
Stars fall for wishers,
with their desperate requests.
There is something powerful and meaningful about time. As we dream along in riddles and reality, we become aware that memories cannot be forgotten. "Sunset" sets theatrical dreams aflame and makes us know that time itself will outlive the monuments of stone. Thank you, Valerie, for letting us into your "Sunset" in time.
Simply ingenious~!~! 'Memories forgotten? Or, just put to rest? Stars fall for wishers, with their desperate requests.' Woowow..this is some serious GOOD lines~!! A definitely powerful cadence to this poem of might and beauty.. i love sunsets too ...Smilesz. Do try my Enchanting Ritual, val....hope u like it.
Wow! Val, such a complete little and beautiful poem from you.I just loved it...my dear poet friend.You are so talented with words kid...congratulations for such a gem! When are you going to post some new ones kid? I am waiting...and please let me know when you do O.K. My warmest wishes to you and a very wonderful Holiday Season!Take care and till later... Sincerely and with all my love too. Your poet friend Dorian
The element of time is so strongly expressed in this beautifully written poem...I would like to write about time...it's so great,confusing ,and hard to write about a theme... Ali
This is good! short, sharp and sweet!
There is a wonderfully artistic & abstract quality to your writing, which opens it to a variety of interpretations. This is a "thinking man's" piece & I truly enjoyed its metaphoric quality. Amy
Gentle is the night♥