in the bed as i lAY

in the bed as i lay,
awaiting sleep
thinking of you,
in darkness i peep
no relief.
my Magneta, you make me a poet..

Author's Notes/Comments: 

absurd you may say
, hey,

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this is so beautiful!

They are all short but beautifully formed lines! Loved it! Cheers SS


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thank you and keep loving,,

thank you and keep loving,, hehe,,

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loving is what I do best Vib

loving is what I do best Vib ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am