'pon a railway lines
like reality and dreams.
and train is our thoughts,
riding over them
to eaach other they seek,,
ever do they meet..........!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

just a thoughth

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SSmoothie's picture


not a bad read! :)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

drangel's picture


If you look the distant most end it seems they are farthest...farthest and nearest are thus illusory. Relationships count, not distance. Hence Proved!
I enjoyed reading this thought-proviking piece...I will read your other poems.

Dr S T Wali
Pediatrician/Pediatric HIV Specialist
New Delhi-110001

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just wrote it in a philosophical state of mind, as dreams and reality are the 'poorak' of each other, i think.