wHAT tO dO

one must enjoy life,
i often think
here i start my deduces,
to get outta stink

life is meant to play,
not to be a game
not to suck yourself,
just to earn a name

education ruins childhood,
thats what i think
they who study day n night,
become different being,,?

as my thoughts progress,
i jumps to next step
if one is to enjoy life,
is first need wealth,?

but wealth is not lying there,
a big post you must adhere
and how do that comes,
a century need hundred runs

and that brings you to books,
enemy you never dare to look
can one waste time on such crap,
open it, just to wrap

and marks you must bring,
screw up and get that thing
yuk, the muck lies in corner,
must be picked, later or sooner

hence my deductions reach an end,
not a prediction just a trend
where i began there i reached,
to enjoy life one must grieve,,,!!!

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Some great points raised here but

Your English skills need a little fixing the grammar makes it a little difficult to read but I agree with much of what you are saying! Very interesting read! Good work.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thank you ssmoothie,, and its prob. coz i'm not an englishmen,, but it workss,, americann style u no,,,!!