The End

I'm giving up 

on growing up

I'd rather die

than live a lie

My life is dull

it breaks my soul

It's a life of pain

and one of shame

I failed too much

Pity's my crutch

I rely on you

But you relied on me, too

I cannot bear

continuing to care

About my life

my life of strife

Author's Notes/Comments: 

No, I am not going to off myself, these are just thoughts.

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the end

I enjoyed the read.  I have felt this way at times as well.  I totally relate.  Just thoughts - I feel you.  "I'd rather die that live a lie" is the best line.  I will be reading more from you.   Thanks for reading my work under nettajack.  I appreciated your comment.


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