Don't Fall Asleep

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The Influence

wasted potential died on that bathroom floor.
his pain was way to much for him to bare.
he took some pills to reach a comatose
not breathing was a goal to toast

don't fall asleep
don't fall asleep
don't fall asleep
You wont wake up

regret at the worst time is what he gets.
He stumbles to the bathroom to reverse his fate.
Can't find the the door and stumbles in the hall
His vision is to blurry to really recall
Everything is black and he wishes he could react
he now knows its not what he wants but its too late now

don't fall asleep
don't fall asleep
don't fall asleep
You wont wake up

How did I live through the pills I took,
I was alone that night I looked.
I planned it out
my struggles were to much and I was filled with doubt.
I was lucky I have at least that to give
yet so many never get out this hole

don't fall asleep
don't fall asleep
don't fall asleep
I wont wake up

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A deep song I wrote tonight, I have guitar to follow the vocals. It really hits home for its written about suicide and how close I was from not being alive, witch I have been getting nightmares of lately. I will record it with a think If I get a request, Its a really personal song tho, so I am even kinda sketched out just posting the lyrics for me to remember in case I forget.

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MrsLivingston©'s picture

This one got to me. I have

This one got to me. I have attempted suicide a few times. I like your poem though. I can relate to it. Great job! Keep on writing!!!


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