Would You

If I suddenly went away
would you miss me more than before?
Would you still visit me each day?
Would it become a daily chore?

 

If I wasn't here this very moment
I would not want you to cry
If you feel like you can't take the torment
The least you could do is try
(Chorus)

 

If someone took me away
would you hang on to our last kiss?
Would everything begin to fade?
Would you think that's how I'd want this?

 

-Chorus-

 

If I wasn't here today
I'd only have this to say
I'm full of happiness indside
you've made me breathe after I've died
I dont want you to worry
I'm in heaven and my soul's free
I'm waiting for you to join me
So just relax and live for me

 

-Chorus-

 

If I took myself away
would you hate me every day?
If everything was left in vain
how would you make it through each day?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

very deep and personal for me.
7/13/03

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ramonathompsont's picture

You've made me breathe after

You've made me breathe after I've died.-Best line ever!

Elizabeth Brantley's picture

I think this is one of your best. I love the way it is written and the way it makes me think. It really makes me worry though, very nice...

Kris Grula's picture

absolutely stunning work, top shelf stuff. amazing