My Bicentennial Boo



                   Boo how are you

                   wanted to stop by and

                   wish you all that is good

                   and just to say...



                   H ave

                   A n all the way live

                   P icture

                   P erfect

                   Y um yum booty-licious



                   B e all you can be

                   I n all your luscious

                   R ipened sensuality

                   T oo

                   H ot to cradle cautiously

                   D o

                   A nything

                   Y ou wanna type shin-dig



                   'cause Boo, you not even half spent

                   meaning you got a ways to go

                   before you start chargin' yo' hips rent



                   25 years - my bicentennial Boo

                   you rock it girl, doing the things

                   you do

                   write your own flow

                   and have others go with it

                   'cause today is your day Boo

                   don't let nobody play you

                   go show them how you

                   create flowetic art

                   with your poeticheart

                   let them know - a quarter sense

                   aint nothing said that wasn't meant

                   come here - let me pinch yo' ears

                   25 years - my bicentennial Boo

                   just lovin' you

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Aaron Burks's picture

My GOD this is the best poem someone could get on their birthday, this is so nice man poeticheart got a real gift with this one, Well my birthday is may 5th don't for get a brotha.
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Rachel  Marie Tate's picture

I'm sooooo glad you wrote this for Marti! This was so sweet and touching, I know she just loved it, plus I really liked the way you built off happy birthday acrostically, that was cool! Oh and bp stands for black planet, it's a cool spot to check out :-)