Hid my love in a poem

 

Saw your face in a story

 

Read your voice in a book

 

 

 

Hid my love in a poem

 

 

 

 

 

That you took

 

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patriciajj's picture

Simply wondrous. I echo what

Simply wondrous. I echo what Starward wrote; it certainly is profound emotion contained in a succinct, beautiful package. Each line is the definition of elegant yet pulsating brevity, then sewn together loosely with the crafty use of white space it becomes . . .

a marvel.

 

The last line rings true with such power and perfection that I don't know what else to say.

 
S74rw4rd's picture

Beautiful!  Such succinct

Beautiful!  Such succinct lines, but bearing such a profound emotion!


Starward