Are you the One?

Will you save me and help me from drowning in my dream?

Are you kind and nurturing or is that just how you seem?

Will you help me back to my feet when I fail and fall down?

Will you try to make smile when mine's turned into a frown?

Will you comfort and hold me when I need it the most?

Or is that just something you like to boast?

I really want to be with you

But not if any of this isn't true

Because I need a man who will treat me right

And not someone I have to wait up for all night.

So are you the one I've been waiting for?

Or have I once again picked the wrong door?

Are you really the guy you appear to be?

Or are you just making things up to get with me?

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Afzal Shauq's picture

its a good and inspiring poem of your's..like its idea and the way you did perfectly..seems that you are a good poetess.. and hope you write more to let the readers read.. and hope you will go through my poems too and like it... if yes then the comments will be respected from your side being a poetry friend... basically I am known as a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and let me shair one of my own famous say with you regarding peace... ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...Afzal Shauq ))) and sure the is based on love and love is being omited by us the , the persons of literary world.... best of luck friend and waiting for hearing from you...