How you make me feel


You hold me captivated, no stronger touch is known

When I stand before you, all my thoughts are shown

Without an intent or purpose, you moved into my life

Imbedded into my mind deeper than any knife

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phil_carcione's picture

Beautiful, simply beautiful!

I really liked this one, although most of your writing is awesome.

running_with_rabbits's picture

i like that tho it seems undone and short


Much Love