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Battle (2)
Armor half-on
Sword on the floor
Demon knocks
And walks straight in through the door
Taking control
Blinding the man
Pain forced him to see
He lost before the battle began
Armor donned,
Sword is drawn
No time to think
The man relies on his brawn
One man alone
Broken, bruised and sore
Against an army
Of which there's always more
"Give in to the darkness
There's no hope"
The man is clinging
But he's out of rope
The sun falls
Fighting through night
The hours pass
With no hope in sight
Lose once more
Retreat, try again
He loses more ground
Than he could ever hope to gain
Armor is rusted
Sword is broken
Despite his might
"The battle is lost" out loud is spoken
All at once
The dawn brings new light
A grand white horse
On it sits a shining Knight
The man cries
He knows this knight
His was the side
For which the man meant to fight
"I failed you"
Hiding his face
He speaks the words
Full of contempt and disgrace
The Knight looks down
"For you I died
Through Me you are strong
With no reason your face to hide
"New armor I give you
Now sharpen your sword
All I want is for you to stand
Once again and face the horde
"You failed Me, yes
Now you've lost your pride
So try again
This time with Me by your side"
The man smiles
He knows this Man
For He won
Before man's battle even began
The horde cringes
"New armor he wears"
Attack with strength
They want this man for theirs
12/05/01
"He lost before the battle began"
That line jumped at me, I love it,so blatent and great
the best even
good good
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
""The battle is lost" out loud is spoken" the lost of this battle is outspoken or something like that and i like how you use the change of how his sword is and stuff its cool and i like this part ""You failed Me, yes Now you've lost your pride So try again This time with Me by your side" and i'n not gonna tell ya what is ee in this or what i think tis about :) we'd fight :) ash
Much Love
Ashley