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I Call
I call out to You
Yet You don’t seem to answer
I cry out Your name
Yet You don’t listen
I scream up to You
Yet You don’t seem to hear me
My Plea
“If You are my hope,
Why do I feel hopeless?
If You are my strength,
Then why do I feel weak?
If You are holding me,
Why do you feel so far away?”
Finally
In silence I collapse,
Bruised,
Broken,
Hurting.
The rock I once stood on
Has turned to quicksand
And I have no more strength to fight
And in the silence I hear
A whisper in the breeze
I feel You
And You tell me to wait
To rest
To trust.
That is soo true sweetie, we do all have to break down from time to time, knowing that it will get better, but it doesn't make the breaking any easier on us now does it.
tisk tisk
this is good
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
Me too...=)
Been there, and what you say is absolutely true. Amazing!
very nice....i like the thing you wrote at da bottom hehehe :) love ya always Vicki
"I call out to You Yet You don’t seem to answer I cry out Your name Yet You don’t listen I scream up to You Yet You don’t seem to hear me" see the roof never answers lol this is good shows how everyone feels like god has left at some point in their life and how we all lose faith for even that tiny bit of time. and i love how you show the fatc that when we lose that faith, we think there is no way out of it and that god has left us coz if he is our hope and we don't have hope he has to be gone. when he really isn't its more like u don't want to let him give u hope and won't see the things he sends for hope. and at the end he comes back (so u think but its more like you let him back and stop being blind) an so are the days of our lives (no vciki gots me doin soap quotes HELP!) great poem ash
Much Love
Ashley