Can You Escape?

It's a firm stance on mud

That pulls you in so bad

In this very dense highland

Creeps an only quicksand!

One attempt over another

A help is needed whenever

Our motility keeps us further

Down and spiralling under!

Some took another stance,

Asking god one more chance,

So, with a branch and a lance,

They tried more than once!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This particular poem immediately succeeds the poem entitled "That's It, I'm Done!".

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Kris Grula's picture

So painful & such raw emotion ~ a heartfelt write with a beautiful essence and . . you are absolutely wonderful at expressing distress . . truth and heart-wrenching sincerity