Eyes Wide Shut

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Prevailing

When I close my eyes

I hear this sound

Like a lullaby

Faint and distance

Sweet smells of nostalgia

Resilience

When I close my eyes

I taste these memories

Like how the sun dies

Mournful and Longing

Knowing by faith

Belonging

When I close my eyes

I feel this calling

Like the sunrise

Spirited and Near

I exhale encumbrances

No Fear

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Carcass's picture

Clever title, great poem and

Clever title, great poem and I felt like this was about how much more you can see without your eyes. How you can feel much more life radiating around you.  Great job :)

truthintragedies's picture

That's definitely what it's

That's definitely what it's about. I was trying to capture a feeling I felt last night. Only using the immediate things surrounding me. Happy you liked it ^__^


**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**

Carcass's picture

Of course I like it, I try

Of course I like it, I try and do that with dreams/astral projection.  This reminded me a lot of those experiences. Can't wait for more.

KindredSpirit's picture

Oh yeah

Like it.
KS

truthintragedies's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**