the love of my life

I dream of the times we shared,
i remember of all the things we said,
and when i'm laying in my bed, and close my eyes, you're there,
i'd do anything to have you by my side, but you told me you met someone else,
i don't hate you, i wouldn't let my self do such thing,
just because you never felt the same, doesn't mean your not the one i love,
and just like i told you, i want you to be happy, if not with me, then at least with him,
i told you i wouldn't talk to you anymore,
not because i don't want to,
but because my heart breaks every time i think about you,
i cant take knowing you know i love you, and treat me like a friend,
i know its better then nothing but its just not the same,
ever since you told me, i cried my self to sleep, and even though i'm a guy,
that doesn't matter to me,
your always in my mind, day and night,
and tonight i say i love you, until the end of times.

for you....A.W.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i know it might not rime, or be the best poem ever, but i love this girl so much, and i just found out that she met someone else, and well i found this site to take out my pain.

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It may not be my place, but here are my 2 cents.

"It's all right to love someone who doesn't love you back, as long as they're worth you loving them. As long as they deserve it." — Cassandra Clare (Clockwork Angel (The Infernal Devices, #1))

Your poem doesn't have to rhyme for it to be on this site.

Just by reading your thoughts about this individual is beautiful in a heartwrenching way. The way you express yourself is real. The emotional cravings of a love out of reach. I know all about wanting something that you cannot have, but love cannot be forced. It must flow naturally. I've learned that life is a lesson, and we teach ourselves with our mistakes, or memories we conjure back to life from the past. All great things come to those who are patient. All great writers are born from their pain. The way you feel about her never let that go. You must embrace it. Even if it's harder than breathing. Believe it or not but friends are closer than lover's. One day she will see the man that I see. Someone faithful, and honest. Someone to cradle her within her darkest hours, and if God wanted it that way than maybe just maybe..
There will be guys before you, and there will probably be girls before her, but I believe that if it is truly meant to happen than you two will find your way back into each others arms. Don't put your life on hold. I wish I didn't..

That spark of friendship.
That love you hold.
Never let it disperse.

Your writing is beautiful.
Continue with it please.
God bless.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

true-feeling-for-her's picture

thank you for your comment.

i really appreciate your comment, thank you. ive always been into this but i always thought a guy writing its kinda weird but then again it helps me a lot so i'm just going for it.