” Alone Again With Me”

Keep me from myself,
So I can do no wrong,
I can't blame no one else,
I have never been that strong,

Paths that lead to nowhere,
Now beyond the blame,
Back down on my knees,
Again it calls my name,

Here I am, alone again,
Distorting everything I see,
Tear my soul, and wreck my life,
Leaving me alone again with me,

This war inside my head
Tempting me with lies,
Blinded by reality,
This reflection I despise,

What have I become?
I never meant to harm,
Myself is who I hate,
Stick this needle in my arm,

Here I am, alone again,
Distorting everything I see,
Tear my soul and wreck my life,
Leaving me alone again with me,

Happiness came crashing down,
At life itself annoyed,
The person that you once knew,
Has forever been destroyed,

Falling apart by the hour,
The fragile being that I've made,
Please forgive the pain I've caused,
I cannot be saved,

Here I am, alone again,
Distorting everything I see,
Tear my soul and wreck my life,
Leaving me alone again with me......

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kerry's picture

Powerful

A wonderfully crafted, amazingly powerful work -- the emotions just flowed into me. Very well done :)

SSmoothie's picture

Another great piece Triz! You are very talented I do admire your

Work! I hope you can be saved from what it is you want to be saved from in your poem, I could read it again and again quite happily! Awsome work! Cheers SS


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Areik's picture

Bravo!

I really like this. It rhymes and it makes sense! So much feeling is put in this poem. I just love it!


My poems are pure and easy to read. I do not cry and I will not bleed. I love it all and it's easy to see. In me lives a poet. And a poet that never deceives

lkline's picture

I love this poem, very

I love this poem, very powerful. I like the technique of repeating the one verse, it really makes it come together and flow. I can definitely relate to the pain.


Leslie