MALAYSIAN HAIKU OCTOBER 28, 2003

dying to be born -

three kicks

in the womb

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I looooooooooove haiku no matter what the topic. I think it is a talent to fit an emotion into 3 lines. i love the opening line the most- dying to be born. I don't know if you did it purposely or by accident but its just ironic you put "dying" to be "born" together.