thoughts?

we've all been chewed up, and sallowed 

living dormant in the large intestine

until its our time to be dumped out

and flushed away

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is just a thought thats been running around in my head for awhile.. was wondering what anyone thought of it.. i dont know if i should use it or scrap it..what you think?

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Well, Timmy, I think you

Well, Timmy, I think you should keep it, because al though I haven't yet arrived at it's destination, I have read it 7 times now trying to get there... 

 

(I don't think I want to go)

 

But they say, if a poem is good, you'll read it over and over.

...


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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haha thanks

haha thanks

nightlight1220's picture

;-D

;-D


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "