what a failure

and you know i'd just like you
to count the scars and scratches
and do you remember
all of the screaming matches

that were built upon
the association by guilt
oh why can't you see
that it is comforting to me

 

why don't you just skip a couple of steps
scorching and staining the path

stranded and straining and constantly trashed

built up and awaiting the crash

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nightlight1220's picture

Beautifully

Beautifully said.

~peace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

SSmoothie's picture

Your writes, especially the

Your writes, especially the ones like these capture me! Awesome write just a great slant on it! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

pldappls's picture

you're like one of my

you're like one of my favourite writers on here. it makes my e peen skyrocket (SKYROCKETS IN FLIGHT [BOOM] AFTERNoON DELIGHT) when you say such like nice things about my 'works'.

 

 

 

you ave my sword my liege

SSmoothie's picture

I'm too honest aren't I?

I'm too honest aren't I? Perhaps I s should use more tact? ;P lol! You got got some awesome stuff, you shake it up and you bring it, each time I stake delight in what will come next :) hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."