fiend

i've given up my soul for you and

i didn't mean to promise to

relinquishing promises after promises

reliving stress and not at your best

all of the stressers and pressures

feeling how you're tied

don't care about how hard i tried

i do not want a single thing

i don't need what  you could bring

and i do not need your help

or when you try to save yourself

always sticky and sickly when wet

the best and greatest that i ever met

the last thing i could have held

it's not  like anything i have felt

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Wow,this is really great! Now

Wow,this is really great! Now polish this shit and make it shine! Caps and things (says the hypocrite) ;) love the lines in this and the easy rhymes! noice! SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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tytytytyty'   you are way way

tytytytyty'

 

you are way way way too nice to me (saying for the billionth time) i'm not gonna be a buzzkill downer thoug and be all 'woe is me, i suck' and say for this being something i came up with in 5 minutes it's not really bad and i actually kinda like it.

 

 

 

you're the best smooths