fearless

you know you make me sick

no colour, no radience, no more glow and shine

why can't you feel me

you know you no longer thrill me

 

come here and hear my breath

hits so hard it scratches and scars

burning everything to the ground

all of the things that you couldn't ever say to me

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SSmoothie's picture

This cuts like a knife though

This cuts like a knife though butter and dissects your soul! Realm about fucking brilliant! (Except that lastline needs a tweak) but still  fucking love it! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

pldappls's picture

i have never before heard

i have never before heard 'tweak' and 'line' used in the same sentence that didn't mean something sketchy.

 

 

<3 ty you're too kind to me. i'm less than  even like okay. you're leagues and leagues above my skill and it means heaps that you don't tink i suck (because i do)

 

 

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SSmoothie's picture

I think you're leagues ahead,

I think you're leagues ahead, even when you're just mucking around I find brilliance in your so called mediocrity I feel I'm the amateur sometimes when I read your works. Trust in what you have it is of far more value to us readers! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

pldappls's picture

you're the best really.

you're the best really. you're like crack without the negative effects and the willingness to suck dick to score it for the ego <3.

GOHIL48's picture

that was ''wow'':)

that was ''wow'':)

pldappls's picture

i don't know if that's good

i don't know if that's good or bad but thank you :p