Man Slut!

He grabs me by the neck and he screams “kiss me! Kiss me!”
I give him what he wants because I know he’ll miss me, miss me,
Demanding, but I like guys who know what they want, he wants me.

 

The problem with this is that he wants every dark haired girl too,
He just adds them to his list and prays he never gets confused,
I know this is no way to act and I’m pretty sure I’m being abused,
The only thing that makes me happy is to think he’s the one that’s getting used.

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osiriss-'s picture

powerful

words --- love

theloudervoice's picture

thank you :)

thank you :)

Adam아담's picture

Fine piece of poetry! Love

Fine piece of poetry! Love can be so good, but when your view of women is no deeper than their skin, your life is lust and lies - and someone gets hurt. This isn't love, this is lust.

This shouldn't be.


Cheers,
Adam_San

theloudervoice's picture

thank you :) yeah, well

thank you :)

yeah, well maybe one day i might find a guy who isn't a total snake!

ThatCaptainguy's picture

Thats really good, how long

Thats really good, how long did it take you to write this particular piece?

theloudervoice's picture

Thank you :) Not long

Thank you :)

Not long really, i never take long to write something. :)