The School Boy Love Note

I've been seeing you lately- Well ever since school started,

Plus I heard around campus that you and your boyfriend parted.

I've always found you attractive- But I'm starting to think I have a chance,

I heard that he cheated on you and never showed you romance.

That's not a real man- Sweety, you were just messing with a little boy,

If nothing else, I want to be your friend- Just to bring you a little joy.

To put a smile on your face- 'Cuz you're too pretty to be sad,

And when I see you walking with you're head down, it gets me kinda mad.

I've had a crush on you since we were 12- But I never said a word,

We never have been good friends- But I know my voice was heard.

I like you a lot- Everything about you intrigues me,

I have seen what others have done wrong and I'll do it right, believe me.

Basically what I'm saying- Well, asking you with this note,

Is will you be my girlfriend?- Please check YES, NO, or MAYBE SO.

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dasweetyjd's picture

This is a great write. I enjoyed it.

twiztid_girl_'s picture

I really like this one. I think its really cute. Sorry if thats not the way it was meant to sound but i like it anyways =)

Becka Zeits's picture

aww...this is so cute...thanks for sharing