Quicksand

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Sinking deeper

there's no escape

everything has gone awray.

My world is spinning

I'm falling

down the spiral of failure

I hate myself

I have no faith

Hope

Maybe

I might get through it all

There's a chance

there it goes

out on the street

nowhere to go

I have lost

all hope

I've been sucked in

I'm drowning in the pit

Quicksand

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Afzal Shauq's picture

wow .... its a good and attractive poem... agree with your theme and the rich way done... hope you go through my poems too... I am basically poet with 6 books in hand and member of this site too.... your comments are welcomed.. hope you keep writing always in the same fantastic way.... pray for your long and healthy life good poetess friend.....