WHEN I"M GONE

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When tomorrow starts without me And Im not there to see If the sun should rise and find your eyes All filled with tears for meI know how much you love me As much as I Love you And each time that you think of me I know you"ll miss me too. But when tomorrow starts without me Please try to understand That an Angel came and called my name And took me by the hand And said my place was ready In heaven far above and that I"d have to leave behind all those i dearly love I had so much left yet to do it almost seemed impossible that i was leaveing you so when tomorrow starts without me dont think we"re far apart for everytime you think of me I"m right here in you heart.

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I dont know why i wrote this just felt like it.

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

this is excellent and the most profound truth of loving someone in this realm or the next

9inety's picture

Very nice, very sweet. Maybe you could consider a few classes at your local community college for poetry or creative writing you have talent.
Have a great day.
ps
thanks for the nice comments. I am not that good but I do appreciate your kind words.

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot