malfunction

Shallowness trails behind
Her unsteady mind
She's so unaware of her loose fitting ways,
Her frequent mishappening,
Of her misleading character.
She knows no destination
For her actions lead her nowhere
But in a circumference of unhappiness
The transparent world that she has
Recently entered leaves her unaware
Of her surroundings
And as her new domain focuses on
Retrieving the energy she possesses,
She becomes zone-bound
A prisoner of no escape
She must see love
For only its trueness has the power
To re-grasp a part of her inner self
But her eyes must open for her to witness such
And as long as she depends upon it's
Advanced unfriendliness
She will forever be trapped inside
The depths within!

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nightlight1220's picture

Explore the depths! Know your

Explore the depths! Know your depths! Great message. I would have brought that out more, but the way you put it, makes for some amount of intrigue for the shallow person. Beautifully put together.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Morningglory's picture

I'm with nightlight...

I'm with nightlight... "Explore the depths! Know your depths!" Welcome to PP! Looking forward to reading more of your work. :)


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