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A Sociopathic Ex-Boyfriend(My First Attempt)
You tried………………….
While I lied
All the things I said I wanted
Were soon to be forgotten
My mind…………………..
So messed and broken
No remorse in my eyes
I look away while you cry
Your words……………….
Prayers aimed at deaf ears
As I stay in my shell
Wrapped in scars from the years
My curse………………….
Leaves me empty
Though I yearn to be whole
Strangely ironic for the man with no soul
I find myself like the
I find myself like the seemingly souless man. I feel I know exactly how that is.
The last line;
"Strangely ironic for the man without a soul."
Beautiful. You JUST started writing poems, woah, you are going to be better than most people who have been writing for years. Natural ability shows. I really like it.
Love,
Watching The Living
If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.
Well it's a good first
Well it's a good first attempt, and one can feel the emotion that has gone into this. Though the poem is a bit sad, i will look forward to reading some more of your writings, and do continue to write because before to long they'll be masterpieces.