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Staring at the computer screen
Watching intently at the comment activity screen
I sit and watch anxiously
In hope that someone will critique me
To give me an honest view
On the poems that i do
If you like them
Then thats really great
If you dont then just say
I wont be offended in any way
Feedback will help me improve
I look forward to a critique from you
Please keep sharing the works you do
confronted by keys an words
confronted by keys an words an screen.
as if blue
then there is no ans
I despair
an call the
Bill Gates
but he does'nt ans
tis apoem
a plum
nonetheless