you are my forever

i want to write

without the words

like seeing blind

feeling without emotions

just feeling

fingers touching hope

i want to drown

in your sweater

(i stole it from you)

i could spend an eternity

describing you with my eyes

writing a novel with

the movement of my heart

using no words

just a heartbeat

and your smile

i wanted a forever

what i got was you

i adapted all my memories

left the pain in a nightmare

and the love in your smile

you wrote my heart

on a hammock made for two

we count stars

because everything is beautiful

except the word always

it's without you

you are a possibilty

because you never say never

thank God

you are my forever

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ok so i built everything around the last line... when then became the title... it's so cliche, but i don't care. like i told my friend one time, i am just one big sappy ball of cliche. and i wouldn't have it any other way.

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Corrina Sthreshley's picture

i really liked this poem. it really shows the feeling. i hope you two made it somewhere. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!

Josh Glasgow's picture

you wrote my heart
on a hammock made for two
we count stars
because everything is beautiful
except the word always
it's without you

Fantasmosophical. I love making up words. I noticed the hammock reference. A reference I've made many times in my life.

Shawn: Cory, I'm no rocket scientologist, but I can tell that something is wrong.

Boy Meets World is a funny show. Did you know Will & Grace got an Emmy or something for BEST SITCOM? Now, I've seen that show, and it's amusing and all, but.. if that's the BEST SITCOM on television.. wow. Television is draining. I miss the days of Boy Meets World.
Topanga had big lips. I think I'm the only guy in the world that would say that she isn't "hot". She was pretty, sure. She was evil, yeah. But she tried to be nice. I guess that's gotta count for something.