Dramatic Sympathy Winner

I dangle perilously from the edge

                        of her words

with slippery equivocal surfaces

   that laugh the vain, sweaty grip

                        of my hand

merciless but jingling so sweetly

   as i stumble out of her sky

(Icarus who thought he could fly)

to die a dusty, thirsty death

  in some overlooked rain barrel

      denied its purpose in the drought

but baking and wilting

         i'm waiting for her rain

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I can taste the sap dripping from my lips.

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Molly K.'s picture

omg!! stephen, it's amazing and it's beautiful. i don't know how you write like this and so well, but it's beautiful and you're amazingly talented. never ever ever stop writing. i love you work. keep it coming.

Brittany Bunker's picture

WOW you're probably the best poet on this site!!!
brittany

Danielle Blades's picture

wow stephen,how do you do this?!this is brilliant,you have such wonderful phrases(jingling so sweetly)thats beautiful!dont ever stop writing or i will personally kill you(as ive probly said before!hehe)ttyl ~guinevere~