Yeah, Right

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Not So Cute (G-PG)

Yeah, you're tough all right

A bag of pain, fear, and spite

Day locked away in a trunk of night

Dukes always up and ready to fight

That little pissed off look,

   yeah, you're a sight

So intent on dark you can't see the light



Maybe one day you'll listen

Yeah, maybe

Yeah, right

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Sometimes people are so intent on being angry, that any attempt to improve their mood just worsens it.

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jgupta's picture

It seems I have hit the jackpot. You are a wealth of worthy writes, right ...

ladyhawke's picture

Wow...did you know me in another lifetime? lol..this poem could have been written for me...as I was many moons ago. It is really brilliant and says it all in such a simple way. Excellent writing!

Pax,
Rhiannon :-)
(LadyHawke)