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I Made You Alive
my bones they ache with pain
my heart is scared of the rain
night turns cold and shadows turn
but deep inside is where it burns
You said
I made you alive
I came here to die
I made you alive
and in My name
you'll survive
my tears they turn to dust
my gold it looks as rust
but through Your strength i find peace
a sweet harmonic release
You said
I made you alive
I came here to die
I made you alive
and in My name
you'll survive
the pain it finds it's way again
but soon i know my heart You'll defend
cuz i am Yours now and always
please remind me of Your grace
You said
I made you alive
I came here to die
I made you alive
and in My name
you'll survive
You said
I made you alive
I came here to die
I made you alive
and in My name
you'll survive
you'll survive
cuz I made you alive
This is fucking beatiful! I think you must be quite deep, there's a lot of darkness and torment in this poem which was exactly what I was feeling the very moment I read it, and so i thought i'd make a little comment about it. No offence but the vast majority of poems written by women on this thing suck balls, also the vast majority of the men's poems too i guess. I particularly liked "my heart is scared of the rain...night turns cold and shadows turn" and my gold it looks as rust" but the best line "you said i made you alive, i came here to die" is so beautiful and with every repition it brought a tear to my eye. thank you and be happy :)