@ 27.225 MHz: Sonnet On The Poetry Of Patriciajj

"Total grandeur of a total edifice . . ."

---Wallace Stevens, "To An Old Philosopher In Rome"


Vergil, Pop Stevens, and Old Possum:  hear---

another grandeur, like unto your own,

ascends our sky but stands blessedly near:

a living presence, and always expanding

the splendor of its verbal quality

(which never stoops to trite inanity);

consistently and ardently commanding

the utmost verbal skill and artistry,

which stands apart from, and will not be prone

to, dilettantish mediocrity.

These verses form a whole cosmology---

consistent in its scope, approach, and vision,

the full example of pure Poetry: 

its elegances utterly Patrician.


Starward

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Even if this wasn't a

Even if this wasn't a generous and highly valued gift from a connoisseur of words, I would honestly say that the artistic merit of your sonnet is supreme. It has your distinctive splendor flowing through every line and each line is a triumph. Vintage Starward and masterfully opulent.

 

Groping for words now . . . Silenced in humble gratitude.

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Thank you for those kind

Thank you for those kind words.  The grandeur of your Poetry towers over this site the way the sun towers of the earth; and, like the sun, it brings light, warmth, and sustenance wherever it shines.  We do not thank the sun; I doubt most people ever really think about the sun.  But I need to thank you for the quality of your verbal skill, and the great delight it has brought to me over these past three years; hence, this sonnet, small but sincerely offered in good Faith.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Your kind support and rare

Your kind support and rare talent have made all the difference, not only to me, but to many others. I sincerely applaud you.