Nuances: Nostalgic Moment

That whore's severed head

you just flung into the Seine

takes your thoughts to that

exquisite autumn when you

honed your (s)kills in Whitechapel.

 

Kyakuchuu

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Creepy but you write such

Creepy but you write such effective sentence starters allowing the viewer to piece together or imagine a narrative to wander off in!  Cheers SS 


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Thank you so very much for

Thank you so very much for that comment.  I am so very glad you found it to be creepy, which was exactly what I wanted the poem to do.  I have been going through a rough patch, lately, and your compliment on this poem has really cheered me up.  Thank you so much for validating what I had hoped to accomplish in the poem.


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And you did it awesomely I

And you did it awesomely I shall leave a comment or two on the others x


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you most kindly.

Thank you most kindly.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]