Epigram On Editing My Poems

With a gentle smile and not a frown,

Lady Certainly puts her shoeless foot down

(as the old saying goes);

her foot sheathed in sheer hose,

with reinforced toes.

Defined as unacceptable, those

poems are removed and deleted

until the whole task has been completed.

 

Starward

 

[jlc]

 

 

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and_hera_met_zeus's picture

Nice!!!

The "poems are removed and deleted" adds an air of mystery and maybe a hint of forbidden fruit.  Compelling.

S74rw4rd's picture

Thank you very much for this

Thank you very much for this kind comment which, coming from a poet such as you, is a high compliment indeed.  And thanks for the friend request.  I am on my way out right now, but I wanted to reply to your kind words before leaving, and i hope to read more of your poems either tonight or tomorrow.  Thanks again.


Starward