My life is a bad haiku

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The thing about me,
is my life is a haiku;
with not enough words.

 

to tell my story,
the right words do not fit in;
I am restricted.

 

life held hopes so big,
though words would not come close;
descriptions fell weak.

 

perhaps I have learned,
one haiku is not enough;
life is more than one.

 

perhaps haikus are,
my own best analogy;
perhaps they are not?

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Lol! 

Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

they're not...

all Haikus are bad...

I love you

I Hate Haikus

I am emotionally torn right now 


Much Love

Ashley

nightlight1220's picture

Well..your life may be a bad

Well..your life may be a bad haiku, but you, my dear, are a most beautiful sonnet. ;-)

..♡♥♡


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

RoC's picture

And like you, my dear

A haiku says so much, by saying so little :)


Beauty befalls you
Transcendence of mind and soul
To stir beating hearts


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Poetic_Eyes's picture

Love it.

Love it Ms. Smoothie. Hugs sis