Closer still*

 

 

come a little closer,

that chasm between us is millitmeters long,

hold those thoughts

and listen to a  new song  

 

come a little closer,

time to see clearer from this heart instead,

lower those eyes

and tilt that confused head

 

come a little closer,

something Ive wanted to share for a while

its time to reveal this delicate kiss

it goes a little someting like this

 

come a little closer,

lightness and living in this one sweet carress

 moving gently, exploring your depths

a moment of clarity in a lover's breath

 

 

come a little closer,

holding your heart warm like this

loves hold exquisitely replete

a taste of love so discrete

 

 

come a little closer,

time to see clearer from this heart instead,

lower those eyes

and tilt that confused head

 

I promise you'll be okay.

 

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re done :)

re done :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

bishu's picture

Very very nice indeed ... The loved one is indeed lucky SS

Very very nice indeed ... The loved one is indeed lucky SS.Beautiful words SS.The rhymes..the thoughts.. Stupendous!!!!!!!!


©bishu 

 

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OOhhh bishy you make me

OOhhh bishy you make me swoon! I love your exuberance! you are such a delight in each way every day as I make my way through the highway of poems you really are so wonderfully vivid and sure know how to show em! hugss. Always such a delight to read your comments!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Moonshadow's picture

This seriously needs to be

This seriously needs to be put to music! This is gorgeous!  =tilt that confused head...= <3


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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I wish! lovely to see you on

I wish! lovely to see you on here again! hugss pm me!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am