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Third eye what am i but a collection of blunt truths
and searing love punctuated with a soft touch
an algorythym to your ultimate pain
there is no world like the heart
where the soul can be what it wants
my soul will forever tamper with yours
I will cherish the pull of one
and resent the protection of the other
nothing here but cold strength,
obedience and suffering
intollerable cruelty and a love to spite all loves
burning fires of quiet destruction
I crave the perfection I cant touch
I feel and hear as if it was my heartbeat
what am i but a collection of blunt truths,
searing love punctuated with a soft touch
and a desire for oneness
in a heart designed for two
an algorythym beating out endless pain
because you wont unlove me
From beginning to end.
Wow - Moonshadow was right, how did we miss this one? "There is no world like the heart where the soul can be what it wants" "What am i but a collection of blunt truths" "because you wont unlove me" ugh, that ending - there it is - the impact.
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
I enjoy following comments
I enjoy following comments from those poets on postpoems whom I most intensely admire---like Astral_Tides and Patriciajj: because their reading choices, and their responsive comments, always uncover and explicate the finest of this site's many poems. Guided by them, to poems of superlative greatness, I feel like I did when a freshman, just discovering real poetry for the first time. I never thought I would experience that again; and here, late in my life, I am given a repeat, and now the experience resonates even more. Your poem, Ssmoothie, is excellent; your command of imagery is awesome; and that first stanza really, really packs a power like a massive star, and draws the reader closer by its sheer gravity. Wow!
Starward
Seriously I can't believe no
Seriously I can't believe no one has commented on this one! it is profound! I love that line: " blunt truths, seering love puntuated with a soft touch" this is definately a keeper! Missed you and Missed your work. big Hugss Sis
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Aww thanks sis i teally like
Aww thanks sis i teally like this one too! Missu too hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Aww thanks sis i teally like
Aww thanks sis i teally like this one too! Missu too hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."