ImPartialeteness

Frailty

how strongly it seems to impose itself 

its my new suckling 

feeding itself 

on my strength

morbidly amplifying 

the tick of passing time

humanity wilfully 

wasted by so many 

so many under striving saplings 

live tearing thenselves apart willingly

that wouldn't even notice such things as atrophy 

And I, who know only working and giving 

am delivered

A gifted blow 

suddenly

rendered 

partially

obselete.


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Nice write though a mite despondent

Nice write though a mite despondent  Respected SSmoothie


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Smoothie, your heart of gold

Smoothie, your heart of gold will stay golden.  I love you with all my heart, I mean that. I am crying at this very moment and if you have read anything from me I try not to lie and just know this isn't a lie to boost you, this is the truth and if I could I would hold you in your time of pain. You bring a lot of joy to my heart and I didn't wanna kill your feelings. If you are feeling bad it can always do some good in another persons life, it warms peoples hearts to help angels when they fall. You are an apsolute gift to this world and I hope you the best in all your life. Keep it creamy smoothz. 

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GreenSuitcase your comment

GreenSuitcase your comment just rocked my heart in the most brilliant way! Speechless tight hugss! ;D 


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