I'm more comfortable dying.

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Life has never been my strong point 

living always seems so complicated

i'm more comfortable dying 

A little more each day 

the seconds slip into hours as the years 

pass to claim the colour from my days

i often admire those who do not struggle 

accepting their fates

i refused to be led 

or kept.

Dying to live or

killing myself trying.

 

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nightlight1220's picture

W have a choice about how we

We have a choice about how we feel. (About everything) Reality is, we have been dying since we were born....but we have the choice about how we accept that reality. Just ask yourself, "how have I chosen to spend my time dying? How have I chosen to feel and manifest this reality in my life?" We have been conditioned to live in the delusion that our cells live forever. They slough and fall off constantly and WE, through the choices we make consciously and subconsciously, regenerate ourselves.

 

True story.

 

Peace always.

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

SSmoothie's picture

Yes nightlight you totally got it!

:) you all have brought forward some of the deeper meanings by examining the point of view in this piece each of you coming at it from different angles. It's wonderful I love reading your views they help remind me how possible it is to view the worinland life in any huejet hie trick is to choose the one that Works best for you! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

WhatIAmOrWillBe's picture

I feel this way daily

Thank you for giving me the words to read and feel and recognize this about myself.  Your talent touches people... never forget that.

 


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Dying to live... Yes the

Dying to live... Yes the daily grind can catch you for sure I am a doer in every sense of the word. I have an arm injury that is crippling at the moment and no real answers only more scary questions. It has forced me to take an stock and measure out my life, which has so far been in the service of others and as validating and emotionally fulfilling as that is, it's lonely being capable. Its 'horrible when after being such a force that I need some consideration and that it does not seem to be coming my way. yet the whining and undeserving are ushered into cotton wool every day. It's been an amazing roller coaster ride of emotions to say the least. I am glad though, I have learned I don't need much because pp helps keep me going. You guys help keep me going virtual friends with real lives and expressive hearts who touch my heart. You all keep me full. hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bishu's picture

Respected SSmoothie a small humble poetry-gift for you

Gravity of ignorance binds us into orbits

Knowledge of the unknown can break us free

Men have relished ,experienced,revealed

In languages we fail to decipher today

Sinking into the depths we grab a piece to keep afloat

We forget that we are all like a small leaky boat


Floating merrily down the moving stream

Methinks:Please look around the magnificent banks

Look up to the sky above and say your thanks

For the pretty coloured flowers,birds,animals,people

The song of the rippling water will lull you to sleep

The flowers' fragrance is not yours to keep


Fruits of your labour hang above in bowers

Either you eat or others its all the same

Try your hand at something new;don't feel any shame

Gaze up at the wondrous stars lying afloat

Don't worry- the 'oar' will keep safe your boat

When you reach the orbit's end cast off your coat


What were those writings in the Holy Books?

Now obliterated,splashed with ignorant reign

Tiny fragments of doctrines haven't eased the pain

The gentle squirrel clambering...its bushy tail

Black-yellow maneaters; model for every male

A poacher's bullet may make them carpets for sale


The wobbling ,the bouncing,the twisting,the turning

Till the "orbit" is over don't fear drowning





©bishu


©bishu 

 

SSmoothie's picture

How true dear bishu!

What an engaging and warming poem! Thank you for you kind considerations dear, I treasure them always you have a kind and gifted heart. Much appreciated dear respected bishu! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bishu's picture

Are you a cardiologist ?

Are you a cardiologist ?Sealed


©bishu 

 

SSmoothie's picture

Haha of sorts lol! ;D 

Haha of sorts lol! ;D 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."