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oh bring back those passionate fiery days
pwhere the fire in my heart wrote
words of praise and denigrations
where the terror of losing you
ripped through my heart...
Now letting go hurts less
and the words lay stagnant on the page
i hope with my head
and kill it with my heart
rise in me that bellowing fire,
those gracefully swirling lashes of flame
passionate flickers and warm tender embers
bring my soul back to that place
where words and love held meaning
I'm losing my religion;
my heart refuses to listen.
My words are stuck;
the truth seems so cold
and I am desperately fighting numb...
Hey! It will come back again!
Hey! it will ome back again! Don't you dare give up! Love your work! It always gets me through! Tight hugs Mav
"I'm losing my religion, my heart refuses to listen"
who write like that? Powerful stuff. You do!
If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream!
Thanks Mav! Long time no see!
Thanks Mav! Long time no see! Missed you! Hope you've written something for me :D !
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Keep fighting the good fight!
Keep fighting the good fight! We can not afford to lose such thought provoking and moving talent. I am here with you. You are not alone. Hugi!
Thanks inkstain! You totally
Thanks inkstain! You totally rock! Thanks for being there when I needed you tightest warmest hugss :')
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Nothing is ever lost respected SSmoothie
Nothing is ever lost respected SSmoothie. Newtons Law "Energy can neither be created nor destroyed" The same thing is reborn at some other place at some other time in a different shape. We must live on hope. Hopeful we live.. hopeless we fall/fail. Letting go is awfully easy SS !! Letting go will end a person in a monastery or alone atop a god-forsaken high mountain where he/she'll think and think his brains out but none to share or care. If one person cares then life is worth living. Sorry for the nonsensical blabbering. Ignore this comment if I bored/annoyed you SS.
©bishu
Could never be bored by our bishu!
Could never be bored by our bishu! Hugss and thanks :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I read these words and my gut
I read these words and my gut senses...my mind says>> "that's what big change feels like on the inside"...go girl!!! Just let it happen---this too shall pass.
~peace~
...........
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Hugss nightlight ;) you're
Hugss nightlight ;) you're wonderful xo
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
your writing is so vivid, i
your writing is so vivid, i love that. you still have that part down.
it'll come back. you'll get immersed in the flow just like before. perhaps this is just momentary?
I'm praying, I hope everyday,
I'm praying, I hope everyday, it's a bit difficult when you read such beauty formed of others hearts and minds moved to script, in delicate font and visual cypher, I feel such mediocrity when faced with such stunning arrangements of thoughts and emotions. ;) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
SSmoothie---it's a different
SSmoothie---it's a different style, that's all. ~peace~
.............
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
it's all just in our head
ah, but what you think is mediocrity, might be beauty in the rest of our eyes. not might, is. and what we think is mediocrity, is beauty to your eyes. it's all just in our head, we are all just partially blind when it comes to seeing ourselves in full force, beauty, and power.
So true, I have difficulty in
So true, I have difficulty in taking my own advice
this you've brought a flush of shame to my cheeks as I recall this poem written not too long ago! Lol!
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/ssmoothie/poem/959725
You made me smile thanks hugss ;D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."